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Thursday, August 16, 2018

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Hello my name is Jake i am 9 years old and my teacher is Mrs Page. This is my second year in Room 9.  My favourite foods are bananas and pizza In my spare time i like to play games in Room 9 my favourite subjects are reading i am good at reading
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  1. AnonymousMarch 10, 2020 at 2:44 PM

    Hi I'm Abby, I'm from marshland school. I like that you added your favorite food.
    I think that you could add a catchier title, maybe some pictures too.
    This reminds me of the time I ate 1 and a half pizzas in one night.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 10, 2020 at 2:46 PM

    Hi, I am Angelica from Marshland school.
    I like that you added facts about yourself.
    Maybe next time add some pictures and a background too.
    Did you know I also like pizza’s?

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