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Friday, August 17, 2018

big rocket

9 comments:

  1. This is amazing because it looks like a rocket with windows and clowns
    Did you know i i was away for it
    Next time, you could pot more detail
    Why did you...pot black and blue and red and yellow and one spike

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  2. Hi there, my name is Cameron and I am a student at
    Ohaeawai Primary School. I really like your big colorful rocket.
    It made me think about NASA.
    Have you thought about writing about your rocket?
    If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
    http://oscamerone.blogspot.com/ .

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  3. Hi there, my name is Cameron and I am a student at
    Ohaeawai Primary School. I really like your spaceship .
    It made me think about NASA .
    Have you thought about explaining why you made a spaceship?
    If you would like to view my learning, my blog is
    http://oscamerone.blogspot.com/ .

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  4. This is amazing because it looks like a rocket with windows and clowns.
    Did you know I like how creative you are.
    Next time, you could put more detail.
    Why did you decide to make a rocket instead of something like a car?

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  6. Hey Jake its Jai from New Brighton Catholic School I liked the way you put a clear rocket picture. Did you think about doing a slideshow because maybe next you can do a slideshow. Next time put a walt so I know What you were learning and the meaning.

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  7. Hello my name is Lily-piper from marshland school I have chosen you to send you a comment to.
    I like the background that you have used It is very out of this world.
    Next time you could do more slides than 1.
    Maybe you could do a description next time.
    Thankyou for reading this comment. You did a good job.

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